A Letter From the "Artist"
Hi! I’m Marisa, the “Artist”. What you see here is the same story you read when you first came on to my blog. But this one, this one is more like 4th grade. When I revised this story, I found grammar mistakes, not to many good details, and quite a few punctuation mistakes. I think you will enjoy this revised edition a lot. But, if you still can’t tell the difference, why don’t you compare the 2, and then see what you think? Plus, I bolded the new and improved parts for you. This story was written at the begging of the year, when I was more of a 3rd grade writer. So, instead of reading about the story, why don’t you go ahead and read it? Hope you like it!